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Shana Mandze

Protector
Protector by @dreamshadow (Shana Mandze)

She is the protector of life, a true nurturing creature. { graphite pencil }

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Posted: Thursday, 27 September, 2001 @ 08:51 PM

(refrains from exclaiming: Man, she laid an egg THAT much bigger than herself?...After all, perhaps she's a protector of "orphans", so to speak, which makes her just that much nobler.)

Anyway, I love the wings on this...Somehow, though, I'd like to see some canvas space below and to the right, then a huuuge shadow of the wings added.

Idunno why.! But that's what occurs to me.

my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill

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