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The Thin Line Between Love and Friendship
The Thin Line Between Love and Friendship by @Hack_Beta (Fallen Angel)

Damon and Brooke were in a dream I had about the Four Elements after playing Golden Sun for 28 hours straight. I also thought of a poem to go with it........(I need a life) The day love starts is when they met At first sight breath, moment and heart beat Though the physical attraction was strong, The mental was stronger. As the days went on, their friendship grew larger. Both never letting go of their dreams. Always denying they had feelings for other. Sadly weeks, months, even years went by. They thought avoiding each over other would even the way. But still their lives and affection grew for one another. And both knew something was wrong. Missing. They tried filling the gap with other things, other loves. Dreams and purposes in life are thrown out proportion. Trying to forget each other’s souls, smile, eyes. Finally after years of waiting, friends closer than ever. Both knowing the moment would come. Hearts pounding, a beautiful, but eerie silence filled the air. What felt like a lifetime, was really a single second, As they embraced and embarked on their new adventure. When the thin line between love and friendship. Breaks and combines two young hearts into one, As two separate hearts beats become one in unison. On the sunset, of the beginning of their lives.

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Fallen Angel

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Posted: Saturday, 03 August, 2002 @ 02:25 AM

Wow.. sniff That's so beautiful! It made me tear up when I read the poem. Lovely, picture, absolutely lovely.

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