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Jess Coon
Jess Coon by @lainburt (Lainey Burton)

an art trade i did with jess kadikoff of her character jess coon. drawn in painter 7.

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Posted: Wednesday, 13 August, 2003 @ 09:54 PM

While she looks more catlike than coonlike (could be a char design thing, though), I really like what you've done with the colors on this character. The tiny bits of yellow and magentas everywhere are very nice. I also like the solidity and liquidness in her eyes--very nice. They work ESPECIALLY well with that evil smile of hers.

My nitpick? The hands. They're just a tad too cartoony. To make them look a little more authentic, they'll need a bit more parlm, and at least one more joint to them. Right now, it's as though she doesn't have much palm, and only has her fingers up to the 2nd set of knuckles (the first set being in the palm).

Freetoon.com has some nice toony hands to look at, if you're interested in them for the future.

In short--nice pic! Keep up the good work!

Posted: Thursday, 20 November, 2003 @ 08:53 PM

Wondrful coloring. You have loads of talent.

Posted: Friday, 26 December, 2003 @ 04:24 AM

The hands are friggin' fine. It's a cartoony style not to mention not even your character. Jeeze. rolls eyes

I LOVE those eyes. They're beautifully done and your shading gave them such depth. The coloring on this is magnificent. I love the way the hair is kind of chunked into groups and the fur has different colors mixed into for effect. Fantastic job! :) My one and only nitpick? The snout. It's not lined up with the eyes and the nose is kind of crooked. I didn't see it until I looked twice though.

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