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Fire and Darkness
Fire and Darkness by @froswrig (Frost Wright)

Okay, it seems that Watari has a sister in my twisted world of Rp. Her name is Mirage and I guess in a sense she's a royal pain. Oh well. I still like how I did the dress.

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Posted: Friday, 31 August, 2001 @ 06:39 PM

Well the dress does look pretty but her legs are very skinny. So is the other character that you have there. They are almost too skinny. Her hair flows very well.

Posted: Saturday, 13 October, 2001 @ 04:45 PM

I love the colors in this one, as well as the shading. But I think in some areas (especially on the person wearing the pants and shirt), you went a teensybit overboard on the zigzag folds...where it just doesn't look convincing anymore. The dress is nice, though.

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