Aww, so cute. I really like the outfit too, especially the torso area. your coloring is very exacting, you can see without the lines. Mine's really messy, lol. I lack patience.

Neat linework. The clothing and the face both came out really well. Nice use of color, especially on the non-lined one. I'd suggest giving the values a bit more contrast on the non-lined one, though, so the different parts stand out better.