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Jessica Gonzalez

Luna
Luna by @Dark_Maiden_Kira (Jessica Gonzalez)

Here we have Luna again, with not so perky ears, and shorter hair. I've also tried to make her look older by shrinking the side of her eyes, and giving her more of a nose, and fuller lips. The ears are not quite even, but for anyone who draws elves or elf like creatures, they know how hard it is to get them even. The only other thing I'm displeased with is her arms. One of them is a bit smaller than the other. Her outfit is perfect, and her figure is appealing now. YAY!

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19y78d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 27 April, 2005 @ 07:08 PM

nice outfit!!! i love her earrings and her belt. and i love her hair with the purple and black.. very nice ^_^ nice ears too o-o although theres one thing that bother me... why are her boobs pointy? o-o

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