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i wish
i wish by @Ryath (Ryath Lonewolf)

i did this one when i was haveing a bit of a ruff time.The wolf is ment to be me stuck in a child hood memory(the room ment to mean that and am stuck in it).

the paoms read

I was waiting for someone someone to open the door and let the light shine agen for i stuck here alone alone in mine head

I waiting for someone someone hoe herd mine calls and will save me from mineself for I stuck here alone alone in mine head

and the other one read

I stuck in a memory a memory of old when i was young and years were long

I stuck in a memory a memory of old when i was young and when years were sad

am stuck in a memory amermory of old when i was young

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Ryath Lonewolf

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Posted: Thursday, 05 December, 2002 @ 11:18 AM

WOOOOOWWWW!!!!!!! That's really cute - and powerful - at the same time.

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