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Spotted Mouse
Spotted Mouse by @olympiaxylaige (olympia xylaige)

Yay! There are a few things I don't like about this at all .. the orange-like shape of the breasts, the hands, the shape of her head..

Finished at 1 AM. I figured I'd do a creature in earth-tones for once, got bored, and splashed a bunch of color everywhere. Phew!

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20y139d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 11 July, 2004 @ 01:36 AM

IIEEEE!!! OMG it's so cute ^__^ Im normaly not to fond of mice furries but when I see one in your style I think they look uber cool n schtuff. Nice work :3

P.S. I want her hair <3

Posted: Sunday, 11 July, 2004 @ 08:35 AM

. I love the ear shadings. The leaning that along with the tail waves gives a sense of motion or impending motion. Is there some Biker Mice from Mars in there? Reminds one a bit of a TMNT, the original BW adult comic not the toon or post toon comic. The head shape is fine for a Mouse-people! Maybe more of some Jerboa or Cane mouse than Dormouse? The tail is def more rat-ish. It all works well though… I would avoid rethinking her and just go with it! What’s her back-story? That may help if make her a recurrent theme. “Oranges”? Not a common shape but there is no really "common" shape to that anatomy part, and some do have oranges. More common w/ Irish and Cajuns. Seriously. I actually know a Human in real life that minus the ears, whickers and tail could pass as her…ahhhh genetic variability! Keep it up I.O.

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