This is from a creative storywriting class that I'd like your thoughts on. Plus this section needs more stories! It's a big one so you might want to fire up a text reader. I recommend ReadPlease. It's FREE! X3 Oh and does any know the S7 forum code for paragraph breaks? You may have noticed all the extra separations but it's to make it easier on you until I can figure it out.
And now, on with the show.
Wasn't that a fun read? This story was actually supposed to be the first chapter of a much longer story hence it ends at a no-so-exciting cliffhanger. Thank for reading, I look forward to your thoughts.