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David Walch

Hiroshi Kimura
Hiroshi Kimura by @Zentron (David Walch)

The third of my facial character designs, and this character is the enemy of Ryo. Artwork © Copyright 2002 David Walch

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Posted: Thursday, 07 March, 2002 @ 05:33 PM

I think this is the weakest of your three designs. It has a lot of potential, though.

You've got some villainous vibes going on (the eyes, mainly), but nothing's "pushed" far enough--he could be the hero's best friend with this face.

Feel free to really NARROW the eyes, give him an ANGRY expression, a grim mouth. Make the chin a little angular, the hair a little wilder...then, if that's too much, tone it back down. But at the moment, he doesn't really look the part it seems you want him to play.

If you have any questions on my babbling (or want to see what I'd come up with), feel free to email.

my art: www.side7.com/art/daniwill

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