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David Walch

Mai Okuda
Mai Okuda by @Zentron (David Walch)

The second of my facial character designs fir my Manga comic project. She is the girl who Ryo keeps on saving and eventually becomes his girlfriend. Artwork © Copyright 2002 David Walch

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Posted: Thursday, 07 March, 2002 @ 05:33 PM

I like the haunted look to her eyes. However, this may not have been what you're aiming for; her face says "mature" but her eyes lean towards "childlike"--but they're not definite.

In other words, the features of this character don't give me a clear picture of what sort of a character she's supposed to be. Here, she looks like an independent, capable person. However, if she's being saved all the time, she should probably look more fearful, don't you think? Or have hints of that in her.

my art: www.lunarpages.com/corridor

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