El Thorvaldo

Guarding the Fish
Guarding the Fish by El Thorvaldo (@Thorvald)

This content is part of a serial. Read it in webcomic format here!

My 18th submission to DYOS X. [link]

This comic was done mainly to highlight that even though I was in exile, I hadn't actually been publicly disowned by my doppelgängers, and therefore my orders still carried legitimacy. It also hints at the avatars' own distrust of kulade, as they maintain the Prime Minister's office as functionally superior.

"Guarding the fish" is a reference to a Civ4 story, The "Al Gore" Challenge -- beeline the Internet!

CivGeneral, kulade & Taillesskangaru © themselves;
Operation Flashpoint/ArmA: Cold War Assault © Bohemia Interactive.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]

Comments & Critiques (5)

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Posted: Sunday, 19 February, 2023 @ 08:15 PM

'Guarding the Fish...' Lol! And the the 'a penguin and a seal and an orca walk into a bar'...

Posted: Sunday, 19 February, 2023 @ 10:10 PM

@SheevraSidhe0274: "What's this?" cries the bartender, "A joke?!"

Posted: Sunday, 19 February, 2023 @ 10:26 PM

@Thorvald: Ah to have been in that bar to have heard the rest of that conversation...

Posted: Sunday, 19 February, 2023 @ 10:39 PM

@SheevraSidhe0274: [adds to future script pile] :^)

Posted: Monday, 20 February, 2023 @ 01:30 AM

@Thorvald: Lol

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