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Dartz Encountering Alexander
Dartz Encountering Alexander by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

Not to reveal too many spoilers for the end of Life After the Tears (a current pet project), but Dartz accidentally releases Alexander from where he's been held prisoner by the Orichalcos. Here, the doppelganger is telling Dartz that because Alister doesn't like him, Alexander does like him. XD Dartz just looks unimpressed. As Aubrie put it, he looks like he's thinking "This thing is bleeding all over my carpet." LOL.

I don't know why Alexander's wing is torn, or why his shoulder is cut. o.o; Ow. He doesn't look like any of it's paining him too badly, though.

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Posted: Monday, 18 July, 2005 @ 08:30 AM

Yes, LOL, the eyebrow says it all!

The coloring on Alexander's hair turned out super bright, and I love his eyes and demon wing yet again. XP I think the darker brown with the magenta inside does nicely . . .

Not only does Alexander's wing look cut it looks as though someone dislocated it. Ummm . . . double ow?

Ooooh, and what's this I see on the neck of the shirt, shading? X3 And I do love his sandals. LOL

Posted: Monday, 18 July, 2005 @ 09:34 AM

nods. I thought a red-orange would show up good for Alexander's hair. I didn't want to use plain red, because that's the blood color. XD;

I had to touch up both his and Dartz's eyes on the computer. Honestly, the colors just don't come though on the scanner. -.-;

Ouch! o.o The intention was actually just for the angel wing to be spread open and looking kinda limp, as opposed to the demon one being folded up, but I admit it probably came out wrong. XD; ponders on how Alexander got into such trouble, especially since he hadn't even met the bikers yet! I wonder if he'll make Dartz allow him to stay there until he heals.

^^; Well, I didn't set out to do shading, though I really need to. Not sure what you're referring to that looks like shading. ^^;

Posted: Monday, 18 July, 2005 @ 09:36 AM

I meant part of his neck covered by the collar and where his collar bone should be. Perhaps it was pencil markings . . .

Posted: Monday, 15 August, 2005 @ 05:50 PM

Ah, now I see what you meant by that journal entry! But yeah, that would be bone...actually, at that point on the wing it'd be the equivalent of slicing halfway through your hand o_o;

...this is a horrible thought, but the blood dripping out of his torn wing reminded me of those powdered sugar doughnuts filled with jelly...remind me not to comment when I'm hungry XD;

I think I see what chaosmage meant by shading...it does look like he's got some collarbone-action going on, and his neck especially appears to have those nice manly neck tendons. Even if it wasn't on purpose, it still looks cool ^_^

Nice expressions again...Alexander looks creepily happy with his injured wing (maybe he's a masochist?), and Dartz really does look unimpressed. Also, the computer-adjustments to the eyes don't seem as noticeable in this one...Alexander's look very bright, and almost glowy..

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