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MINI ALCANDER COMIC (page 1)
MINI ALCANDER COMIC (page 1) by @deaddays (John Rios)

Well, here it is. Heres the finished first page of my short Alcander comic. GOD it looks much better than the sketch don't it? Anyway, stay tuned to see what developes and to find out the the heck he's talking to... if you care. I know I do. Artwork © Copyright 2002 John Rios

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Teen (O)
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Posted: Tuesday, 16 July, 2002 @ 09:39 AM
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0.0 What wonders a little bit of diolouge and ink can do. Well, this poves how much my opinion matters. Spidy comic indeed. Nice job Johnny. Were all blessed with ya skillz and cough sence of humor

-Jessica

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Posted: Wednesday, 17 July, 2002 @ 09:28 AM
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the art looks great as always but the text reminds me to much of your funny comics. this looks like its going to be very serious. you might want to pick a different font. just one persons opinion.

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