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Split (2019)
Split (2019) by @ratacombs

Things that used to be one Become divided being in halves Violence turns into fear Breath in duality, like twins start to feel Those halves are developing well My wounds are remainders Painful as hell Either one face each on one side a wall in the heart Like twins torn apart (Split - KMFDM)

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