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Split (2019)
Split (2019) by @ratacombs (Capy)

Things that used to be one
Become divided being in halves
Violence turns into fear
Breath in duality, like twins start to feel
Those halves are developing well
My wounds are remainders
Painful as hell
Either one face each on one side 
A wall in the heart 
Like twins torn apart

-"Split", KMFDM

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Posted: Saturday, 07 September, 2024 @ 06:10 PM

This is really nifty. I struggle with abstraction and envy anyone that can work with it.

Posted: Sunday, 08 September, 2024 @ 11:32 PM

@Thorvald: This was kind of a one hit wonder on that front... I never tried anything like this again. It was mainly vague synesthesia-esque visuals I got from the song it was inspired by.

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