@Laina_Inverse
Laina Inverse

Ohayou!
Ohayou! by @Laina_Inverse (Laina Inverse)

Another pose from an 'How to Draw Manga' book. It was supposed to be a windy, kind of pic, but it looks more like she just got up, and is greeting people, ne?

Category:
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Finished Work
Submitted:
19y332d ago
Tags:
None
Other Work By @Laina_Inverse

Comments & Critiques (1)

Preferred comment/critique type for this content: Any Kind

Posted: Sunday, 02 January, 2005 @ 07:35 PM

It does sort of look like she is waving to people. A suggestion for depicting the wind flow is to break things up a little more. Her hair would have a much better sense of movement if it weren't so stiff. All of her hair moves in a mass. Try drawing more individual strands that are being blown in the wind. The pose is well rendered though.

Leave a Comment

You must be logged in and have an Active account to leave a comment.
Please, login or sign up for an account.

What kind of comments is Laina_Inverse seeking for this piece?

  • Any Kind - Self-explanatory.
  • Casual Comments - Comments of a more social nature.
  • Light Critique - Comments containing constructive suggestions about this work.
  • Heavy Critique - A serious analysis of this work, with emphasis on identifying potential problem areas, good use of technique and skill, and suggestions for potentially improving the work.
Please keep in mind, critiques may highlight both positive and negative aspects of this work, but the main goal is to constructively help the artist to improve in their skills and execution. Be kind, considerate, and polite.