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Vanessa Ho

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minor changes made

Second attempt at a more realistic/different style of colouring. Eyes are still big.... but i didn't want to draw realistic eyes lol....

Was supposed to have a much more detailed and sophisticated background....... maybe i'll do that later....maybe...=p

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Posted: Monday, 28 March, 2005 @ 09:18 PM

I think the eyes make a nice contrast to the realistic coloring personally. The coloring does look very nice though. It flows without any problems in the transition. Perhaps some sharper contrast would help bring it out a little more. Hopefully you'll be able to work on the background more even though it does complement the picture well.

Posted: Monday, 28 March, 2005 @ 10:50 PM

Thanks! I'm realy glad u appreciate it! XD I'll make sure to try my best in working on the backgrounds in the future... T'is hard indeed to make backgrounds! =p

In terms of contrast, i wanted this pict to be slightly softer, but i see how adding contrast would bring it a live more~ =D Thanks!

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