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Vanessa Ho

Jakyte Wallpaper
Jakyte Wallpaper by @MOCHI (Vanessa Ho)

A wallpaper that I am using myself at the moment lol.

This is again, a PS artwork.

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19y237d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 23 March, 2005 @ 01:12 PM

This image is very well composed! I really love the cross-shape in the background, it draws the eye around the piece nicely. I love his expression in both parts, he seems to be a fascinating character to me. The colors are well coordinated.

The only thing I think you can improve upon is the inking. The lines are a little shaky around the characters--if you try the vector tool in photoshop to get smooth lines. I usually ink my sketches off the computer, so I can't really give you too much information on how to use it, but it looks very good on other people's artwork. So give it a try! :) Keep up the good work!

Posted: Wednesday, 23 March, 2005 @ 05:04 PM

Thanks!

Yea, i realised the shaky-ness it was hard overlining things lol and hmm the vector tool... i never really know what it was! lol I'll make sure i try it out!!!! Thanks so much for the help!!!!!

You ink the sketches off the computer? I'm cruious, do u use a mouse or a tablet?

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