@Sha_Gojyo2884
Ikaika

Flying Lady?
Flying Lady? by @Sha_Gojyo2884 (Ikaika)

Just something i did while i was bored. it actually turned out better than i thought it would, I'm just glad i finally got to upload my drawings, lol. well anyway, feel free to give any advice and critiques.

Sincerely, Ikaika

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Posted: Saturday, 21 August, 2004 @ 07:24 AM

Try to build smaller, less masculine shoulders and legs. Also work on your faces; a mediocre face really subtracts from the rest of the drawing. The hair and wings are beautiful, though!

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