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I just need a hug....is that too much to ask? -Rant Included.
I just need a hug....is that too much to ask? -Rant Included. by @Rebecca (Rebecca Mason)

First of all..a message I got on a review on a co-fic I did with a good friend..I put it up on FF.net and THIS is what I got.. "From: Petta()Ehh just so you know... Real Sayajins doesn't lose control when they turn Oozaru. Goku and Gohan are the only ones because Goku lost track of his Sayajin ancestry and gohan, well gohan is too human to controll it, well he can controll it in some manner as you can see when they defeat Vegeta. but other then that.rnITS PART OF THE SAYAJIN NATURE! AND THEY ARE NATURAL SAYAJINS! GOKU LOST A PART OF THAT NATURE WHEN HE HURT HIS HEAD! there. Sorry didnt mean to be rude or mean in any way." heh yeah right..."don't mean to be rude or mean in any way" well sorry bub but that's exactly what you were being..and as a result I feel so unhappy..the bit this person was talking about was where Somika and Quartina went Oozuru and began destroying things..well excuse me Ms. Petta but I thought Saiyan Children can't control themselves in Oozuru state..and now as a result I don't think I can ever write DBZ fanfiction ever again..just because I get one little thing wrong (although I'm sure I got it right) they go all uppity and make such a big deal about it..just because I only write about the Saiyans because their the race that interest me the most, I get that..I now feel like a lost and helpless child..I just want to talk to someone..I want to be hugged and told that 'That person just didn't understand' or 'if that person didn't have something nice to say then they shouldn't of said anything at all' I'm sorry to be making such a big deal about this myself..but I just feel so upset and I needed to express my feelings since I don't have that Petta person's e-mail so I can't e-mail her back and tell her exactly what I think of her comment. But ..maybe I should give up on my DBZ fanfics..maybe I'm just not cut out to write stories on a great anime, other people can write them soooooooo much better than what I can.. Artwork © Copyright 2003 Rebecca Mason

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Posted: Friday, 18 April, 2003 @ 02:36 PM

::hugs you. Squeezes you tightly. LOTS::

Posted: Friday, 18 April, 2003 @ 06:30 PM

::hugs!:: Hang in there, hun! Don't let one review get you down. It was really quite rude of her to type in all caps like she was screaming at you, but please don't let it bother you so much! The fact is, as you explained here, you have a reason for why you wrote it that way. When you write your next chapter, why don't you have a little piece in the beginning where you explain that's why you wrote it that way? It seems a good enough reason to me! So hang in there and don't let people get you down, even those ones that scream in all caps! And keep writing--don't ever give up!

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Posted: Saturday, 19 April, 2003 @ 06:20 AM

hugs you and growls at the peta dude You no make Becca-Chan sad! I hurt you now!!! Please don't give up on your fics Becca, that's one person's opinion, I've been a fan of your writing since you first e-mailed me your fics, and I've loved 'em ever since, seriously, that person has NO idea what they're talking about! I mean, it's a fic, it's called 'poetic lincese' you can write whatever you feel like! Don't listen to them Becca, you're a wonderful person, don't let ANYONE, tell you differntly, okies? mega hugs Just remeber that thier are people out there that won't like what you do, and will express it, these people are called 'inconsiderate idiots' But there are people who will like what you do, and they won't let you be sad about the others ^^ (hey, remeber, i wrote part of that fic too, they might just have not liked what i wrote, and they could've loved your stuff)

Posted: Sunday, 20 April, 2003 @ 08:28 PM

Don't let a comment get you down keep written. on the oozaru thing I have been warching it for about6 or 7 years now and it only depends on if you were trianed to control oozaru like vegta was and goku and Gohan weren't so it just depends.

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