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Melanie Smits

Not Good at Mornings
Not Good at Mornings by @Mel (Melanie Smits)

Kaylen when he's waking up... which takes a while :D He's not usually in a good mood when he wakes up (even though that's usually around 2 pm...)

Done entirely in OpenCanvas, as a 'yay I got a tablet'-pic.

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20y353d ago
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Comments & Critiques (2)

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Posted: Thursday, 11 December, 2003 @ 10:15 PM

He is so delicious! I love his gold eye--the expression you have here definetly captures the "I just woke up, go AWAY!" expression my mother is certainly familiar with, having seen it on me every day... I also love the pose--it fits with the expression, how he's trying to struggle out of bed and doesn't seem too eager to do so! Beautiful job on the hair. It looks like hair--multitextured and colorful. He's just gorgeous! I see that most of the things I have critiqued in your other drawings are fixed here, so I am just going to gaze and awe, and I really look forward to more of your uploads if this is the kind of work you are capable of!

Posted: Friday, 12 December, 2003 @ 03:39 AM

Thanks a lot for commenting! (Again :D) Basically when someone wakes him up and it's not noon yet, and the one waking him isn't his sister... they die. ^_^;; Thanks again. ^^

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