@Seffie_Elaine
Seffie Aaron

My first manga page ^__^
My first manga page ^__^ by @Seffie_Elaine (Seffie Aaron)

Hey! Wow o.o; I actually DID a manga page. I tried a few times before, but I kept screwing up on the first picture and never made it to trying any others around it.

^__^ Also my first time at drawing Eclipse properly!

The layout is my own, but it doesn't really make sense ^_^; I just kinda looked at random pictures in my mangas and said "Ooo, that'd be cool". Maybe I'll get better at it in the future!

Thanks very much for looking, and I hope to see comments!

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Posted: Friday, 23 January, 2004 @ 01:03 AM

Wow Sef! You certainly are improving drastically in your artistic ability. The last two panels look kind of flat, but other than that... every panel is quite interesting.

You put a lot of effort into the characters... especailly the eyes! O_O We want more dangnit!

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