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Seffie Aaron

Manga Page Inked
Manga Page Inked by @Seffie_Elaine (Seffie Aaron)

La la, I got around to inking this thing last night. I'm still not the best with colors, but I think I can make those last two panels look better once I can add color, Tatical Yoshi! Thanks for the comment.

Besides that I think it just makes it look so much cleaner. Enjoy!

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Posted: Saturday, 24 January, 2004 @ 05:16 PM

Yah, it looks much better inked. I thought mangas just came in black and white and gray?

Keep up the good work... we're all waiting for more ^^;;;

Posted: Sunday, 25 January, 2004 @ 10:22 PM

o_____o

I love it.

Though, you already knew that.

steals all the perdy eyes

o___o

Posted: Monday, 26 January, 2004 @ 02:36 PM

OOH! I love it!! XD!

wow! you captured Eclipse's smile pretty well! He's really hard to draw. I'm impressed.

this really looks like a manga page - you got the talent! but I'm not sure what's going on.. maybe you could explain it?

Posted: Thursday, 05 February, 2004 @ 06:08 PM

^^; I'm not sure myself. It was my first attempt at drawing a page in manga form, so I didn't really have an idea to start with, it was just kinda thrown together at the end, but next time I plan on actually making something of it, ya know? Then it'll have a purpose ^__^

Thank you SO much for commenting!

(And yah e_e It took forever to be able to draw Eclipse, everyone else seemed way easier for some reason)

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