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sleping wolf 2
sleping wolf 2 by @Ryath (Ryath Lonewolf)
This is a old pic geting a revamp as mel in mine art course ask for: ).

It a wolfish thin alseep in the grass.

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Posted: Tuesday, 16 December, 2003 @ 07:04 AM

This is a very nicely done wolfie n_n I love the way the face looks- it looks very snuggled up on it's paws. the pencil coloring really went over nice as well! If I can suggest anything, maybe try shading a little? It might give it much more depth. But, it actually isnt that nessisary, it turned out really nice by itself. Great work, and keep it up! =D -<3 Raz

Posted: Tuesday, 13 January, 2004 @ 03:41 PM

Daawww... so cute. Shading has already been noted, so I'll tackle anatomy. Biggest issue is the paws are too small and not well enough defined. Over all it's a good picture, and I lve the border. :D Just those nit picky things that help make a pic. :) Oh, and for doing a border- use a ruler! Leaves a much nicer, more finished effect. :)

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