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lex and Korrok
lex and Korrok by @Ryath (Ryath Lonewolf)

This isa pic i did lex bday but also for Korrok.One of the hyna I will colour blue and the other a yellow/brown colour.

The idea is that one of they hyna is geting adive from the other.sadlly i find that I run out of paper so i mybe do this on A3 so I can add more to it.

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Posted: Monday, 17 November, 2003 @ 01:04 PM

Pretty good. Don't you just hate it when you run out of paper? Umm... some cc for you... please don't hurt me for this. o_O It says to me more wolf or coyote the way it is now then hyenya. I recomend digging up some ref pics. The arms also really bother me. They appear to have no bones. Um, hope you don't mind me doing this, but rather then try explain the issues I see with it and making it look more hyenaish... I redlined for you... http://members.vclart.net/Syris/lexandkorrok_0001.jpg

Posted: Tuesday, 18 November, 2003 @ 03:53 AM

Naa I won't hart you invite i am much in your thanks:).nods ya I have to agre after looking at you red line and then the pic i did before i can see how it look more coyote like.

I really should use ref pic more*hold head in shame*.I thank you so so much for the red line and will use it to make this pic better.If you ever feel ya need to cc some other of mine art then plase go right ahead.

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