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NegaDYOS: plan = plan(plan)
NegaDYOS: plan = plan(plan) by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)
My 24th submission to DYOS XII: [[link]](https://forums.civfanatics.com/threads/draw-your-own-story-at-plots-end.502368/post-14926624)

I knew eventually that I was gonna make some sort of joke about fractal plans... After the carefully-deliberated NegaDYOSes previously, this one snuck up behind me and beat me over the head.

I had no master files for the OFP shots, but luckily the original comic never moved the camera, and between splicing the panels and adding the new text bubbles I was able to paint over the gaps. The whole thing is, of course, directly ripped from HUA Episode 3.

Original comic by me.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt June 2018.]

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