This pic is very fun, there is a lot going on in this pic, but even with that, i find myself drawn to the two ppl in here, you definately do a much better job at line art than i do. You also seem to make hair sooo easy. For me, hair always seems really hard, but the end result is done rather well.... at least i think so...... Well anyway, back to topic...... I really like that background, that is definately something that i have trouble with, lol. I do think however, that the guy on the right's shoulder is a little bit boxy, and tight. other than that, this is really good, and i look forward to seeing it colored.

Sincerely, Ikaika