feller and letter don't rhyme.. nor do they sound like they sorta rhyme but don't :P
Dead Days 1/12/03 by @deaddays (John Rios)
So, I've written 3 Dead Days limericks meant to run throughout the week of Valentines Day. I figure it's something new and semi original in this world where nothing you can do is new and semi original. It was worth a shot though. Alright, fine, it's not, but I'ma do it anyway! MWA-AHAHAHA! Hrm. Um, LOOK IT'S A NEW DEAD DAYS ABOUT VALENTINES DAY WITH LIMERICKS AND EVERYTHING! LOOK! WOULD YOU LOOOK AT THAT?! WHY AREN'T YOU LOOKING! No, really. Why aren't you? Um, There's 2 more coming. One's done already. One's not, but will be in the future. Woah, the future! Bye. Artwork © Copyright 2003 John Rios
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Posted: Tuesday, 14 January, 2003 @ 03:01 AM
Oh, English Major Girl! I'm dissapointed! You of ALL people should know that rhyme schemes don't always have to fit perfectly! Why even the best poets of our time rhymed words that don't sound quite alike! It's a forgivable thing and, believe it or not, some even consider it -gasp- CLEVER! So thanks for the suggestion, but I think it rhymes just fine. ;-) P.S. Thanks for commenting EMG!
lol I love it XD Your style is really cool, and it's nicely coloured too (well, not THAT many colours, but you get my idea ;) ) Keep it up!