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Lauren Mitchell

Poisened and Hopeless
Poisened and Hopeless by @laurmitc (Lauren Mitchell)

delusional i believed i could cure it all for you dear coax or trick or drive or drag the demons from you make it right for you sleeping beauty truly thought i could magically heal you far beyond a visible sign of your awakening failing miserably to rescue sleeping beauty drunk on ego truly thought i could make it right if i kissed you one more time to help you face the nightmare but you're far too poisoned for me such a fool to think that i could wake you from your slumber that i could actually heal you sleeping beauty poisoned and hopeless far beyond a visible sign of your awakening failing miserably to find a way to comfort you far beyond a visible sign of your awakening and hiding from some poisoned memory poisoned and hopeless sleeping beauty

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Lauren Mitchell

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22y124d ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 04 June, 2002 @ 03:45 PM

Found this from your post at the fa.lk.org messageboard. ^^; I really like this. Very .. angsty. I always like stuff like this, with the lyrics to songs in the background like that. Lovely highlights in the hair, too. :>

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