@Lucky_Ladybug66
Daisy Hunt
Valon is injured and knocked unconscious, and when he wakes up, he's riding on Alister's back. XD; Alister is trying to carry him out of there before the place they're in collapses around them. Valon says he isn't an ankle biter. Alister responds with the title.
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LOL @ the Valon comments. XD
Well, Alister is supposed to look weary, so it's good if he does. In the fic, he went through three different fights before this happened. Valon was involved in the last one (well, the first as well, but that's irrelevant here) and that's how he got knocked out. The gangsters then decided to leave them to perish in the collapsing house.
You're right about the goggles. muses on how to fix that in the future.
Q: Given the ratio of Varon's height/weight to Amelda's height/weight, how far can the two travel before the latter individual's legs snap in half? XD;
Proportions are nice on this one...Amelda's build looks even (and even has those nice muscle-tone lines ^^; ), and Varon's legs are shaped nicely...the positioning of his arms seems...off, somehow, though...I think it's just the fact that his forearms aren't visible at all, so his hands look sort of like they're not quite attached to his body...but other than that, things look good ^^ As always, expressions are adorable.
And on a side-note, I'm really fond of Varon's hair in this one. It looks soft, and yet still capable of the magical poof-springy thing it does upon being released from a helmet XD
LOL. Poor, poor Alister. Involved in three fights and then having to carry Valon out of a collapsing house. He did collapse after getting Valon up a long staircase. o.o;
Yeaaahh, I think the hands are off, too, or the arms are, whichever way you wanna look at it. XD;
Muwahahaha. Pop goes the hair. XD;
LOL. Cute. Valon's expression is priceless too. XD It seems like he's leaning back in shock like he just woke up, or as you said, he's proclaiming he's not an anklebiter. He must really mean it. XP
And poor Alister, he looks a bit weary. I find it interesting . . . in this pic, he almost looks more like real-lifish than YGO style. I think it's the eyes. XD; Valon's goggles also look a bit more like sunglasses.