WOW! This did come out really well. That's one of the best pics you've done in a while. Raph's expression came out well and the trenchcoats rock my socks, girl! The anatomy's good, but of course, like most of us . . . the dreaded drawing of hands could improve . . .

And gasp and point! the legendary second belt! LOL. I'm gonna be laughing about that for so long . . .

Raphael...pets him...his hair looks very soft, here...well both of them have soft-looking hair, but Raphael's especially catches my attention.

The pose is especially good on this one...more of a limp look to Amelda, and Raphael's arms are positioned nicely (I'm remembering some of your earlier pictures of Rishid and Malik, wherein Malik always looked a little...stiff...but then, if rigor mortis had set in...I'll stop now). Amelda's hand, though...if he's unconscious/hurt/dead, the fingers of his hand would curl inward a little bit, given that it takes effort to keep fingers straight...but that's a minor detail ^^;;

I agree with the above commenter about Raphael's hands, but I think you could probably solve any problems by staggering his fingers a little, making his knuckles at different heights to make them seem more curled around a body as opposed to flat (like, if the knuckle of his middle finger were just slightly higher/taller than the knuckles of the fingers on either side, his hand wouldn't look as flat...sorry, I'm not making much sense, am I? T_T)

I do love Raphael's expression...he looks miffed ^_^