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Raphie is Angry
Raphie is Angry by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

I'm really proud of this. I love how the trenchcoats came out, and Alister's limp body. And the elder brother figure Raphael is furious! I love it when he gets all protective and brotherly. He wants to punch out whoever hurt his friend.

I don't know where the picture comes from this time. XD; Originally I was drawing a scene from Crimes for Christmas, but if I'd actually been drawing that there would have been all kinds of blood splattered around. And, well, I just wasn't in a "blood" mood today. Sooo. . . . shrugs.

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Posted: Sunday, 06 March, 2005 @ 12:50 PM

WOW! This did come out really well. That's one of the best pics you've done in a while. Raph's expression came out well and the trenchcoats rock my socks, girl! The anatomy's good, but of course, like most of us . . . the dreaded drawing of hands could improve . . .

And gasp and point! the legendary second belt! LOL. I'm gonna be laughing about that for so long . . .

Posted: Monday, 07 March, 2005 @ 02:53 AM

XD; Ah the hands. . . . pokes them.

LOL. Now you've got me laughing over the second belt too.

Posted: Friday, 06 May, 2005 @ 05:13 PM

Raphael...pets him...his hair looks very soft, here...well both of them have soft-looking hair, but Raphael's especially catches my attention.

The pose is especially good on this one...more of a limp look to Amelda, and Raphael's arms are positioned nicely (I'm remembering some of your earlier pictures of Rishid and Malik, wherein Malik always looked a little...stiff...but then, if rigor mortis had set in...I'll stop now). Amelda's hand, though...if he's unconscious/hurt/dead, the fingers of his hand would curl inward a little bit, given that it takes effort to keep fingers straight...but that's a minor detail ^^;;

I agree with the above commenter about Raphael's hands, but I think you could probably solve any problems by staggering his fingers a little, making his knuckles at different heights to make them seem more curled around a body as opposed to flat (like, if the knuckle of his middle finger were just slightly higher/taller than the knuckles of the fingers on either side, his hand wouldn't look as flat...sorry, I'm not making much sense, am I? T_T)

I do love Raphael's expression...he looks miffed ^_^

Posted: Monday, 09 May, 2005 @ 06:19 AM

Ah, so that's why Alister's hand looks off. XD; I'll remember that.

Your advice on Raphie's hands makes sense too. ^^ I think I can get that figured out.

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