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Liz Ramirez

Alt ASADAE Metal/Alex Cinder
Alt ASADAE Metal/Alex Cinder by @LizSama (Liz Ramirez)

Well since DA decided to be stupid and remove me for unjust reasons, i'll try headin' on back to Side7..see if it's worth getting an account by reactions to my art.. DA had lots o'commenters, s'what id like before i pour money into this.

Snippet from DA:

This is the role played version of Metal in ASADAE. As you can tell, he’s smaller, skinnier and far more ragged looking. The story for him is a bit more complex than the real angry big metal. His story follows the other one all the way to the day Knothole was destroyed. Instead of being alone, he was with Amy and both survived the blast due to his ability to transform and speed out of the area. Weeks pass and Amy is an emotional wreck over what happened..Metal cares for her and feeds her and they live a rather peaceful life in the Forest, daring not to go close to Robotropolis and whatever may have cause the damage to Knothole.

It wasn’t until Sonic actually catches up with them that trouble starts. Sonic wanted Amy, why? Simple. She use to like him, and he was quite insistent on keeping potential playmates around. Metal and Sonic fought but in the end he beat Metal and kidnapped Amy, telling Metal that if he wished her safety, he would find Sonya and bring her to him (Sonyas story is also a bit different.)

Metal had no choice..he searched for weeks on end for Sonya and did manage to find her, fight her, beat her, and bring her to Sonotropolis..but by the time he had found her.. Sonic had already done his damage. Amy had been sent through his cruel conditioning process and what stood before him now was insane, twisted, evil… She pranced to Metal and hugged and cuddled him like before…but her scar, and her twitching was terrible… She now split her heart in two, she loved Metal and she was obsessed with her Dark Lord.

Metal ached…she was loyal to Sonic now, but she still loved him… He blamed Sonya for this..for not being easier to find… to this day he hates her now more than ever… he takes a small bit of satisfaction knowing that he sent her to her damnation with the Dark One..but it will never be enough.

Now Metal works as a bounty hunter for hire..often doing jobs Amy asks of him (because Sonic asks of her.) and living a very productive secret life. Theres quite a few things wrong with him..but I’ll not reveal them here. He hunts for a way to free Amy of her Master, hoping to one day live his life far away from his reign, with the one he loves, and his brother Mecha.

Metal revision © LizSama/Organized Chaos

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Teen (D)
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20y297d ago
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Posted: Friday, 06 February, 2004 @ 11:36 PM

My poor sis... Let me be the first to comment! ^.^;;;

huggles I love yas works.. I always will.. and I soo hope the junk that happend on DA don't make you wanna give up on it..

Mecha: Broooieeeeeeeee...!

Posted: Friday, 06 February, 2004 @ 11:47 PM

Metal: nuzzle

Hmm commenting ability is nicer here too.. OOoo

Posted: Friday, 06 February, 2004 @ 11:49 PM

Mecha: snugs

Yeah Side7 really bosted it's self up from last I was here..

Posted: Saturday, 07 February, 2004 @ 11:54 AM

Ooh. You used to be on DA? Why were you removed? Don't expect Side7 to be a lot DA though... Around Side7 not as many comments are handed out =P Make the best of it anyways.

Anyhow, love the picture. Looks great. The coloring and shading are awesome. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing future works from you. [Eh. I didn't read everything you typed up though. Too long for me @_@ I tried to read it though! XD]

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