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FP: Disagreement by @MyFurryMind
I had so many ideas for my original project flooding my head that I needed to make concept art when I was able to. So here we go:
"Most of Zeke's family and their neighborhood's families live a low to low-middle class community, dealing with hardships while also making ends meet. Zeke's mother would take up nightshifts at a local bar and occasionally find a fling which brings up concerns for money and Zeke worrying for her well being. Situations like this end up with her and her son into heated arguments until she ends it in her own way. Living under the roof with an asshole of a brother and a negligent mother, Zeke had to take up the responsibilities and work himself to exhaustion for the family. Besides, he had a purpose for doing so, and it wasn't for them."
Still not sure if the mother will still have this design, but I'm likely going to keep it knowing my lazy butt, haha! Hope you guys liked that small description there. More to come soon!
- Footprints (Now Changed To "Spoors"), Art, Zeke, Razor & Mother © MyFurryMind 2023
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Although I can understand the kind of situations that they would be living in, most of Zeke’s family sound like they make up the worst bunch of a low-income community. His mother sounds like an absolute bitch! Not only is she negligent, but also possibly abusive toward Zeke according to this scene. Razor is clearly not any better, as it looks like he actually enjoys seeing his own brother suffer. That, combined with overworking himself and taking up familial responsibilities, would really make Zeke’s life almost a living hell. I honestly feel bad for him, but I also admire his determination and persistence. Most other folk would probably pass their breaking point if they had to deal with all of that!
Whether you keep the mother’s design or change it, is of course up to you! Maybe you can have her wardrobe reflect her personality, making it clear that whatever money she does have she spends on herself and/or Razor. But that’s just a suggestion. You do whatever you want for this story!