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Ami writing in wather
Ami writing in wather by @cryskars (Crystle Karsnok)

I've have been manga crazy lathlie so you may seen more manga pics or me drawing in that sort of style. ^^;; I like how Ami's eyes turned out I should draw in those kind of eyes for now. ^^

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Fan Art - Anime/Manga
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Posted: Wednesday, 25 December, 2002 @ 03:28 PM
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I really like the idea of this picture, it's so pretty and Ami-ish to be writing in water. The only thing I find amiss is that her thigh seems slightly large--when going for proportion, as my howtodrawmanga books tell me, make farther away objects smaller--even if they don't look that way 'realistically.' You did a great job coloring and I love the water she's writing in especially!

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