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Seraph's Breaking Point
Seraph's Breaking Point by @aliczill (Alicia Zillhart)

Seraph clings tightly to Nisu as she takes her last dyeing breath in his arms before her body goes limp. Seraph gently wraps his wings forward almost hiding himself and Nisu from the world around him as he breaks down and crys. If only he would have told her that he loved her, then she would have knew. Below is a poem I wrote for this pic. ~If I knew... I would have told you~ If I knew that the sun would not shine in your eyes again, I would have told you how beautiful they are. If I knew I would never be able to embrace you in my arms again, I would have to you how much you meant to me. If I knew I could never touch your sweet lips again, I would have told you how much I wanted to kiss them. If I knew that you would never wake again, I would have told you how much I loved you. If I knew not even an angel could save you, I would have told you everything I felt for you. If I knew... your life would end so soon, I would have told you... Artwork © Copyright 2002 Alicia Zillhart

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Posted: Sunday, 14 July, 2002 @ 02:34 AM

That poem is one of the saddest things I have ever read...good work.

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