@serebronaga
Whitney

if i close my eyes forever
if i close my eyes forever by @serebronaga (Whitney)

Ninquel. The hair 0.0 I like it. And the hand. The face is good, too. I need to fix her arm, it sort of wobbles in the forearm area.

Category:
Humanoid
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Work-In-Progress
Submitted:
18y172d ago
Tags:
None
  • 0
  • 0
  • 1,245
Report Submission
Other Work By @serebronaga
Prev
a hymn called faith and misery
Next
he shot me down

Comments & Critiques (2)

Preferred comment/critique type for this content: Any Kind

Posted: Sunday, 24 September, 2006 @ 05:34 AM
Report Permalink

What do you mean? Her arm looks fine to me. It's pretty good as it is, I think. And yes, that is AWESOME hair. Very beautiful indeed.

Posted: Sunday, 24 September, 2006 @ 04:37 PM
Report Permalink

The part where her wrist meets her hand. It's a bit too long, and so it looks like she doesn't have a bone in her arm to hold up the hand.

Thanks for the comment :D I really appreciate it. If you'd like to see the coloured version, it's located here.

Leave a Comment

You must be logged in and have an Active account to leave a comment.
Please, login or sign up for an account.

What kind of comments is serebronaga seeking for this piece?

  • Any Kind - Self-explanatory.
  • Casual Comments - Comments of a more social nature.
  • Light Critique - Comments containing constructive suggestions about this work.
  • Heavy Critique - A serious analysis of this work, with emphasis on identifying potential problem areas, good use of technique and skill, and suggestions for potentially improving the work.
Please keep in mind, critiques may highlight both positive and negative aspects of this work, but the main goal is to constructively help the artist to improve in their skills and execution. Be kind, considerate, and polite.