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Jennifer Pitcock Doneske

The Fountain (draft render)
The Fountain (draft render) by @whitefantom (Jennifer Pitcock Doneske)

I haven't worked on this in a while, but this is a draft render of a scene I'm currently working on, and it more accurately reflects my current skills in 3D art. It's not finished--I may yet change the atmospherics, the lighting, add new objects, change some texture maps, etc. (I know for certain I'm going to change the ground texture map, which I don't really like as it is, and the hedge texture map, because the hedge texture map isn't hi-res enough to hold up to a hi-res print-quality render).

Credit for various elements:

  • Stone female figure is Zygote/Daz3D's Victoria 2
  • Stone lion's head comes from the Zygote lion mesh that ships with Poser 4.
  • Trees are Bryce procedural trees with default Bryce texturing (these will be custom textured in the final render)

  • Water cascades, stone basin, stone slab, hedges, and iron gate modeled by me in 3D Studio Max.

  • All texture maps (ground, hedges, stone basin, stone slab, stone woman, stone lion's head) created by me.

There is absolutely no post-work on this scene (I'm uncomfortable doing significant post-work on 3D images--it feels like "cheating." If I can't get the look I'm going for with 3D meshes and texture/transparency/bump maps, then I'll simply wait till I have more skill or a better computer and can do it purely in 3D :-).

(Spring 2003; modeled in Poser 4, 3D Studio Max, and Bryce 5)

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Posted: Tuesday, 15 June, 2004 @ 11:31 AM

I wish I could think of more to say on this picture, because it's quite lovely. The textures look fine from this view to me, and I particularly like the stones of the fountain. The open gates are a nice touch, and I like the whole scenery here. The background sky is a bit uninteresting, but it's not what draws the eye, anyway. Nice work.

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