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Arielle White

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Wanna buy a crap-pack? GET 'CHO CRAP-PACK!....ew F | by @ariewhit (Arielle White)

can you say CRRRAAAAPPP? cuz i can! LOOKIE! :D CCRRRAAPPPP! And thats exacly what this is! So why am i posting it? I dunno! i'm in a cheezed off mood so i figure i better bash on myself instead of some other person. This is of me and my boyfriend. Ok, First off- DO NOT, i repeat, DO NOT let this nasty little thing represent us! Go look at a nicer pic. gO! NOW! Save yourself 6 years of thearapy!

anywhoz! On with the making fun of the pic-thing-even tho I would hardly consider this art-thing. Flaws!

  1. MAI LORD! Lookit our strange beady eyes! their like, falling off the sides of out heads!...thats a scary thought. Peoples eyes falling off their heads?.... oh my. 0_0

  2. they way I'm sitting- is that even physically possible? my thighs are in the air (don't get any ideas, boys. T_T) and my lower legs are going down. And i'm sitting like that with what looks like NO EFFORT. I wish, but i'm not THAT strong and felxable.....acually I'm not strong and flexable at all. I'm just a stump with limbs and an empty head.

  3. My feet are big and fat

  4. Why didn't I give him socks? He looks like hes wearing loafers. shudders its a tad femanim...not to offend any guys that DO wear loafers! I'm just saying- I'll sush myself now. o_o geats beaten up the loafer-wearing men

  5. uhh...is is just me, or are his legs too fat? My outta-perportion people strike again! HORRAH!

  6. I'm pretty sure i'm not that small compared to him. hes bigger than me (I would hope so, cuz if he wasen't then I'd be bigger than him... o_0;; woh. now THERS a scary thought) but not so much bigger that I would look like a raggidy ann doll next to him! hoO-boy!

  7. umm...the picture in the back. The frames kinda warped out and it looks like its floating in this air. meep. dull voice oh no...watch out...a ghost... sits there for 10 minutes then points at it ahhh.....

More flaws, but BLEH! I don't wanna pick at ALL the things. that list would be endless. Like a pit with no bottom! :D

Remember! No one else can make fun of this pic! Just ME! If anyone else were to make fun of it, I think I'd cry. o_o; (just so you know, I'm ONLY-KIDDING.)

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Posted: Wednesday, 02 January, 2002 @ 10:34 AM

Aww! Poor Aire! huggles I hope you're over your litle "episode". And don't be so hard on the little things like that. Overall, I think this pic is really good! At least you made them LOOK like they're actually sitting down! Last time I tried something like that, it looked like the person was floating in mid-air above her chair! O_o

Posted: Wednesday, 02 January, 2002 @ 04:14 PM

Oh, Pish-posh, Arielle XO You went way over the "insulting range" for your own work. I know we're our own worst criticts to our own art, but still! It may look like sheeyet to you, but it's fine in other peoples eyes. 1) Beady? Whhaaaaaaaa. Not a chance! They look like normal eyes to me. 2) They way you're sitting just looks like your curled up with you knees in the front. But I agree that it's extreamly hard to do good porportions. (I tried drawing a guy pointing at the veiwer... I quit before it turned radioactive) 3) Big fat feet are all the range in drawing style! Plus lookit MY feet! size 11! Don't you find that odd??? XD 4) I agree that people wearing loafers look femanim without socks, but OIY! It's what people wear! So you captured that nicely XD 5) Fat legs, a simple mistake that you'll probably never do again. (although if you never said that I would have just figured he's wearing baggy pants +('_')+) 6) Again, you're hunched up. So if your legs were like his you'd look pretty much the same size. 7) I can't draw backgrounds worth a half eaten' whopper with cheese. And I can't draw 3D technical stuff that great eather! :( At least you have an idea what you're doing. I just don't think when it comes to stuff like that. ... WHOA! Long comment +(O.O)+ I best be going now. I feel peeved too XO drawing dang men is so freakn' HARD! Why is that? Because my brother wont pose for anatomy sketches! (J/K!!) But you'll feel better. :) (gwaks at your "kitty person" picture)

Posted: Wednesday, 02 January, 2002 @ 04:19 PM

Ahh, don't worry about it, Gold! All the cool people have 'episodes'! And all the cool people have drawings that they aren't so proud of!

I know -I- do! silence

And I know for CERTAIN that all the cool people do too! applause

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