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Sarah Beth

Moments
Moments by @rui (Sarah Beth)

points at the viewer I know you might not like it but I worked really really hard on this picture, so please keep the complaints outta the comment box.

Please???????

clears throat Anyhow, I have finally finished my Van picture!!! I sketched this out months ago and scanned it in my computer. I promptly forgot about it after a few lines were made in PS, but I have gained the momentum again and finished him!

Yes, he is meant to look older. Yes, that is HIS baby. This is a companion picture to the fanfiction that I WILL be finishing this year entitled, "Just You Wait".

I dunno, I always liked the 'tender' side that can be shown by Van. And now that I look at him again, it looks like he is about to cry... oops. Anyway!!

The title is from the song, "Moments"

I've had my moments Days in the sun Moments I was second to none Moments When I knew I did what I thought I couldn't do Like the plane ride coming home from the war Or that summer my son was born Memories Like a coat so warm, a cold wind can't get through Looking at me now you might not know it, But I've had my moments.

falls on floor dead

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12y310d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 11 January, 2012 @ 05:08 PM
Rating: 5

Very nice work. It indeed shows a tender side, especially with the way you've done the single source lighting. I like the textures you put on the tent, the bandages, and his pants.

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