The Trail Untrod by El Thorvaldo (@Thorvald)
My 36th submission to DYOS X.ii. [link]
taillesskangaru made it clear early on that even if Hannibal was under compulsion, he was nobody's fool. Rather than charging in as Rocket seems to have expected, he's studying his enemy, as it were, so that however fast his ultimate advance, it doesn't trip over itself.
Rocket © taillesskangaru
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