Sinking Ships by El Thorvaldo (@Thorvald)
My 42nd submission to DYOS X.ii. [link]
Obviously Drouault's estimate was in error. :|
The conversation between Jill and Thorvald is based on a script from CivGeneral. What never ceases to amaze me is how casually his characters treat his procession of love interests; it's as if he's trying to pick a shirt for the day. This comic was quite difficult for me to write: at the same time I was trying to express my indignation over what is a potential extramarital affair, I was also trying to work within CG's parameters. The end result is a compromise, but hopefully one that leans to my side.
Either way, someone's gonna cry.
Jill Valentine © Capcom.
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