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Al Gonzalez

Jerrick - Color test
Jerrick - Color test by @JesterAG (Al Gonzalez)

Jerrick again. This time in color! This is just a test phase right now. Any feedback is much appreciated.

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21y2d ago
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Posted: Friday, 26 December, 2003 @ 03:41 PM

It's looking good so far, Al. Is the red thing a cloak or a scarf? After looking at it a while I think cloak, but at first I thought it was a Shinobi-esque scarf. Anyway, sorry for the very belated comments. I like the boots and the overall design...the colors look pretty good, but that purply background does nothing for them. I think with the proper shading and background this could look quite nice. I do have to ask about the pose though....it looks like he's about to fall over; the weight distribution is rather odd. I know he's standing on a rock on the original sketch, but it still looked like he was floating or something. Is he just doing something monkish? Oddities aside, I think you have something good going that's worth finishing, if you haven't already ^_^

Posted: Saturday, 03 January, 2004 @ 11:35 PM

Let's take care of the Q's in bullet form, shall we? Red thing: Cloak, with a large, shiny, opal stone as the clasp. Pose: The weight is on the balls of his feet and as the cloth suggests, he's kind of fighting back a wind. Background: Very arbitrary stuff. It wasn't meant to be special, just contrasty-ish...stuff...you know, to help make Jerrick stand out.

Stay tuned for Jerrick in 3D in the semi-near future!

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