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Posted: Monday, 04 November, 2024 @ 05:45 PM

Find the North Star and you will always find where you are
towards the setting sun this is it your journey has begun
Through Rock and Tree through meadow and paths you will be 
always moving never stopping to rest
always moving towards the North Star's crest
adventures you will have a plenty
till journey's end, stories you shall have many
So continue onwards journey still 
for the North Star leads you over road and hill
Till finally you come to Journey's End will you find
North Star's reach 
So find the North Star and you will always find Where You Are 

Posted: Monday, 04 November, 2024 @ 05:57 PM
Posted: Monday, 04 November, 2024 @ 06:04 PM

@hariel: As is the picture which inspired said poem well done!

Posted: Monday, 04 November, 2024 @ 06:57 PM
Posted: Monday, 04 November, 2024 @ 07:00 PM

@hariel: No worries

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