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Oniyaneko
Oniyaneko by @twinblades (Tare Fortier)

a commission I did for a girl on www.gaiaonline.com this is her character, Oniyaneko

Category:
Fan Art - Other
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Finished Work
Submitted:
20y27d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 03:16 PM
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I really love the composition on this image! The way her scarf curves around to frame her is very nice. I also like the background, how it is dark around the top and bottom edges and light in the middle--that also serves to emphasize the character. The fishnet design is incredibly well done--I'm quite impressed! I think some bolder, white highlights could make the character stand out a bit more, but the shading is also fine the way it is. Keep it up!

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 03:40 PM
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thank you very much

I see what you mean I just might go back and add highlights

if I don't forget lol, meep o_o;

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