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Yaminah Tashanazi

More doodles of Rune
More doodles of Rune by @chaosmage (Yaminah Tashanazi)

Yay. More pics of Rune I did in Study Hall one day. These are probably when she was in her teens. Like sixteen or seventeen . . . Yah, she's an underage smoker. The second one is obviously not finished, but oh well.

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Posted: Monday, 28 March, 2005 @ 07:20 PM

Nice work! I love the shading on the one where she has sunglasses. And I like how the hair is slightly in motion. ^^

I think you're supposed to rate the pic higher than E, though, if characters are smoking. ^^; Especially underage. XD;

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