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Plotting to the Tune of Raffi
Plotting to the Tune of Raffi by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 71st submission to DYOS X. [link]

The weird colouring on most of the dialogue is the result of a fairly poorly-thought-out technique of keeping the song lyrics in the background somewhat legible by partially erasing the foreground.

Taillesskangaru © himself;
"Bananaphone" © Raffi.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]

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