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Rollercoaster Ride
Rollercoaster Ride by @angelblood (Alice Ghost)

The Belle and Sebastian song 'Rollercoaster Ride' always makes me think of the time I spent in France throwing paper airplanes with messages scrawled on them from my hotel window into the steet. :) People got terribly confused. I was listening to it again and this is the result. n_n Drawn at Mina's oekaki.

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Posted: Sunday, 11 April, 2004 @ 03:53 PM

Aw, this is sweet ^^ And I like the shadows on the beige wall. It's also a sucessful use of a central composition, awesome. ::always tries to do that and fails most of the time:: If I had to say something it would be that I think with this lightsource the arm would be illuminated up to the elbow..as it is it kind of trails off into black space. If you defined that arm I think it would be better. Also, the metal of the headphones looks a little harsh in comparison to the soft feel of the rest of the piece. Maybe it's the purple?

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