Yeah, I realized when I scanned it that it came off looking a tad long, which is odd, because she doesn't look as lanky on paper as she does when scanned. But it's definatly something I noticed, thanks for the constructive criticism though! ^^
RubyHawk's Costume by @angelicalwing (Kira Madison)
RubyHawk (From the KOP) in her new costume I designed for her. The background is a Chinese pink-bamboo print I found, I think it goes nicely with the costume’s color scheme. Normally this character of mine has wings, so I’ll probably add them in later.
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She's very cute! I like the outfit design, it's lovely, and the colors you choose are very beautiful. I appreciate that she has freckles, they give her a sweet, girl-next-door aura.
The anatomy is a little off, mostly in the area between her chest and neck. It's a little too long, which gives her an overly-lanky feel. In turn, it also makes her arm look long. But that seems to be the only area that really needs work.
I really love the shading on her jacket and skirt. The pink is a lovely color, and the bamboo in the background suits this picture nicely. Good job!