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DYOS 10: The Avatar Wars

The Absentee Landlord
The Absentee Landlord by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 43rd submission to DYOS X. [link]

Very rarely has a snap decision had such major repercussions for the story. At this stage of the game, I myself was not entirely sure of Toyoda's motives, and the Hokkaidō adventure could have gone one of a number of ways. Constructing Tōjō as a rogue officer exonerated Toyoda to a certain extent from what followed, and thus fundamentally impacted CivGeneral's perception of him (in a positive sense).

Alyx Vance © Valve Software;
CivGeneral © @GenMarshall;
Bananas in Pyjamas © the Australian Broadcasting Corporation;
All other characters © me.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]


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