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DYOS 10: The Avatar Wars

Edgar Allan D'oh
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Edgar Allan D'oh by @Thorvald (El Thorvaldo)

My 11th submission to DYOS X. [link]

I've got to come up with better titles.

A simple page, but one I think is funny enough to rise above the scrap-heap. Both this comic and the one prior deviate from my usual 863px width as I was imitating lord_joakim's layout; only to realize later that he didn't have a consistent layout. =P

Though my intervention saved Thunderfall's life, it would later be revealed that in doing so I'd critically disrupted his Xanatos Gambit.

[Originally submitted to DeviantArt February 2012.]

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